SUNY Geneseo Department of Computer Science
Peer Critiques of Revised Enigma Essays
Tuesday, April 22
Intd 105 13, Spring 2014
Prof. Doug Baldwin
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Peer Critiques of Enigma Essay Revisions
What did authors revise and why? Do readers find the revision “better”? What else can be improved?
Discussion
- Peer group conversations ranged from mechanics to ways to make arguments more effective to what larger lessons can be drawn about historical fiction and the place of historical veracity in it
- Sources of improvement ideas: it’s fine for them to come from my comments, but the best revisions will be ones that make improvements you believe matter.
Email final revisions to me by Thursday evening
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